Wednesday, July 24, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – The Story Situation


So far I’ve talked about where story ideas come from and naming characters. Scroll down for more of this blog series on how I put a book together.

People tend to think of plotting as a murky business with endless possibilities. While it’s true there are infinite ways for story ideas to play out, most begin with one of only 36 dramatic situations. See here for the complete list of these along with explanations and examples: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Thirty-Six_Dramatic_Situations

This list by Georges Polti dates from the late 19th century and applies mainly to literary fiction. Other writers have simplified it for more commercial work; a quick Internet search will bring up several variations. I’ve actually adapted it for use by romance novelists, which was a fun exercise. But no matter how you look at it, the end result is the same: we have only a limited number of basic situations from which to craft a book.

Examples of romance situations include Star-Crossed Lovers, Love at First Sight, Opposites Attract, Marriage of Convenience, Secret Lover, Boy/Girl Next Door and of course the eternally popular, Secret Baby. These are mere starting points for the creation of stories, however; it’s how you flesh them out and bring your characters into the action that counts.

For my current WIP, the situation choice was practically made for me once I decided to use the Amalfi Coast and a private Mediterranean island as settings. What could be better than an Abducted Heroine scenario? Just think, isolation on that island, no way to escape, no one to interact with other than the self-made billionaire hero. Well, except for the cat named Trouble, of course. The idea has elements of a Stranded on a Desert Isle situation, too, doesn’t it? And that’s not a bad thing, the combining of two types.

Now all I have to do is (1) make this story believable in a contemporary novel, (2) give the hero good and sufficient reason for his action and (3) come up with something for this couple to talk about and do (Well, other than the obvious.) while thrown together for several days. Of the three, the last will probably be the hardest!
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Tuesday, July 16, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – Choosing Character Names

Continuing with the nitty-gritty of how I put a book together:
One of the first things I do when creating a new story is name the characters. Names are destiny for fictional people as well as real ones; as you think about the characters they tend to grow into the names you’ve given them. Beyond that, names in contemporary romance novels can be pretty arbitrary. Practically anything goes—except when it doesn't.

For me, the name for a hero needs to be:
  • Strong
  • Appealing when spoken aloud
  • Indicative of his background but not so unusual it puts readers off
  • Uncomplicated so easy to type
In the early days of my long career, I made a habit of choosing hero first names that started with an “R.” It began as a private joke: my husband’s name is Jerry Ronald, and my two sons are Ron and Rick. The practice was actually a good move as it turned out; a majority of people in the U.S. like “R” names and feel they are attractive and authoritative. When those books made the best seller lists, however,  I became a bit superstitious. It seemed I had to have a hero with an “R” name or the book might flop.
Andrea Bocelli and his fiancée Veronica Berti
After so long a time, it became too much of a strain to find good "R" monikers, and I didn’t much care for the addictive nature of it. I bit the bullet and began to use names that started with other letters. Even today, though, I feel better if there is an “R” in the name somewhere, even if in the surname!

The heroes for the first two books in my Italian Billionaires series are Nico and Luca. No "Rs" there. So what will the hero for book #3 be called? He'll be Andrea, mainly because I enjoy the music and general persona of the great Italian tenor Andrea Bocelli.
For a last name, I’m using Tonello. Why? I came across it on a book I was reading last month, “Bringing Home the Birkin” by Michael Tonello, http://www.amazon.com/Bringing-Home-Birkin-Pursuit-Coveted/dp/0061473340. It just seemed right. As simple as that.

Andrea Tonello. Now doesn’t he just sound like a handsome Italian billionaire?
For my heroine, a name should be:
  • Attractive when spoken aloud
  • Indicative of her personality and background
  • Not so unusual as to be cringe-worthy
  • Easy to type
Do you get the idea I don’t care for unusual names? They’re fine in some genres, such as fantasy, sci-fi or steam punk, but I’ve never much liked them in romance. How can the reader believe in real love if the heroine's name is super-unrealistic? Besides, anything that could make the  reader pause to wonder “Why on earth?” is automatically bad. Nothing should stop the reader. Ever.

You may also question why I added “Easy to type” to both my lists. I’ll be using these names hundreds of times while writing the book. Having to slow down and type a special name with care is distracting; I hate having to deal with mechanics while in creative mode. Besides, I once named a heroine Félicitè. This was in the days before computers with their Find/Replace and macro functions. Not only was the name a pain to type, but every single accent mark had to be added, laboriously and by hand, to each use of the name in the manuscript. A lesson learned!
So the first name I’ve chosen for my heroine this time around is Dana. It seems slightly androgynous to me so useful for a woman cop, but it isn’t aggressively masculine. It gives me the cool, calm and collected impression I have in mind for the personality of my female protagonist. To go with it as a surname, I’ve chosen Marsden. Why? I haven’t a clue. I was driving down the road a few days ago and it popped into my head. The two names,Dana Marsden, go well together, don’t they? Good enough, as I don’t second-guess gifts from my muse.

Other secondary characters will be included in the book, and assigned names as I go along. The main thing I have to remember about them is to refrain from calling them something that starts with the same first letters as my main characters names.
But there is one other name required. An extremely spoiled and hair-raisingly vocal male cat, a long-haired Siamese seal point, will have a large part in the story. If someone doesn’t come up with something better, his name is going to be Trouble!

Want to take a crack at naming him? Just leave your suggestion as a comment below.


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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Thursday, July 11, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – The Big Idea


 How do you come up with story ideas? It’s a question most authors have heard a bazillion times. The answer is—it all depends.
Ideas can come from anywhere and everywhere: a personal experience, news item, chance-heard remark, book that didn’t turn out “right,” or the fleeting glimpse of a person or a place. Sometimes things get started with an unusual character, an intriguing situation or even a theme. Once in a great while a story arrives complete in every detail, like a flower unfurling its petals in the mind. More often, however, it begins with the germ of an idea and develops as bits are added one after the other.

My WIP (Work in Progress) is a case in point. I haven’t quite finalized the title, but it will probably be some variation of THE AMALFI ABDUCTION. The book will be #3 in my current Italian Billionaires series from Steel Magnolia Press. The other two books are THE TUSCAN’S REVENGE WEDDING, and THE VENETIAN’S DARING SEDUCTION, so you can probably see where I’m going with it. I love Italy and the Amalfi Coast is a beautiful area that I enjoyed while visiting there.

So I want to write about the Amalfi Coast and I intend to have an Italian Billionaire hero. Two things decided right off the bat. I also want to use an abduction situation. Why? Because it has interesting possibilities for conflict, humor and sexual tension, all of which I want in this story. With this scenario, it seems convenient to include a private island, and it just happens I’ve read about private islands in the Mediterranean.

Great, three or four initial ideas meshed together.  What next?
Town of Amalfi, Costiera Amalfitana
The Amalfi Coast road snakes along cliffs high above the sea. It’s a stunningly gorgeous drive, but has such sharp bends that it becomes almost a one-lane road in places. Smaller European cars are usually okay, but two large vehicles such as delivery trucks or buses cannot negotiate  some curves at the same time; one of them has to back up into a conveniently placed lay-by. When I was on this road a couple of years ago, we encountered a traffic jam as two big tourist buses met in a curve and neither wanted to back up. Then impatient Italian drivers crowded so close around the buses they could not move forward or back.

So what if my hero in his fancy Italian sports car is caught in such a jam going in one direction, and my heroine in her little rental vehicle is trapped in the other? And what if the heroine is a traffic cop from the U.S. who unsnarls jams all day long?
Why a female traffic cop? I don’t know; it just seems to be what the situation needs. Blame my muse.  You’ll also notice I added a bit of personal experience here to insure a vivid setting.

Okay, we’re getting somewhere.  But why on earth would an OMG handsome Italian who is rich beyond dreams abduct a somewhat too competent American woman? While I was mulling this question a friend happened to mention her extremely vocal and eccentric long-haired Siamese cat. Hmm. What if this incredibly valuable and wily cat escapes its carrier in the hero’s car, and then….

Well, I won’t give away too much of the story, but hopefully this glimpse of my thought processes will illustrate how a story can be put together by piling one idea on top of another.
Next up: Naming the characters.
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Saturday, March 16, 2013

In Defense of Bodice Ripper Romances

The post below was first published on the Regan’s Romance Reviews Blog. Having read and loved (so she tells me) a few of my romances that could be classified as “Bodice Rippers,” Regan asked me to create a post in defense of these romances which feature a forced seduction or semi-rape by the hero. Somewhat reluctantly, for I know it can be a controversial subject, I offer the following:

Accepted wisdom in publishing since the 1940s has been that “sex and violence sell.” This always held true in the mystery, suspense and thriller genres of the time, not to mention newspapers and magazines, but romance novels were the exception that proved the rule. That was until the 1970s and the advent of the “Bodice Rippers.”

Yet there was much more to these books than that cynical philosophy. They were stories that went deeper into the male-female sexual dynamic than any fiction had ever gone before.

The “Bodice Ripper” romance was perhaps established by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss with The Flame and the Flower in 1972, which by 1978 had sold 4.5 million copies. It was a direct descendent of the Gothic novels of the Fifties and Sixties in which the hero often figured as a nominal villain. It also owed a strong nod to stories of women’s free-spirited adventure such as Forever Amber by Kathleen Windsor. These were one-woman, one-man tales, which featured the development of a relationship from a difficult beginning.

Their basic theme was there is no “fate worse than death,” and that women were not devalued by forced seduction—a softer term than rape, the latter being a brutal assault not seen in the Woodiwiss books or the majority of “Bodice Rippers” written by others. They illustrated the essential truth that women can and do survive and triumph over a nonconsensual sexual initiation.

Rosemary Rogers, with her Sweet, Savage Love, put a different spin on the genre by providing the heroine with multiple lovers and a more turbulent story. The basic theme of the Rogers type of historical romance was the ability of women to survive while bringing the men who wronged them to their knees.

To truly understand the genre in the early days, however, you have to remember they were written for a different generation, for women knee-deep in the feminist and sexual revolutions. For those born in the 1920s through the 1950s, the idea that women had a right to sexual pleasure both in and out of the marriage bed was a shiny new concept. The age-old “burden of consent" was very real, and its removal—at least in fiction—seen as a positive relief. These women understood, in a way that's obscure to the present generation, that the heroine's silent sensual pleasure in her first sexual experience was actually her victory.

Added to that, the forced seduction scenario presented the greatest possible obstacle to the traditional HEA (Happily Ever After) of romance that has ever been invented. A distinct part of it was that the hero had to atone (Regan uses the word “grovel.”) for his act toward the heroine, however mistaken it might have been. Toward that end, he suffered direct physical pain as punishment, becoming a surrogate for every man who ever wronged a woman. He often lost the heroine after he'd come to love her and was forced to desperate lengths to find and be reunited with her. His impassioned declaration at the end of the book signaled his complete surrender to her as a mirror of her initial surrender to him.

That these books have been devoured by millions upon millions of women all over the world indicates something profound about how they were viewed at the time, and are still valued today.

A charge often leveled against the stories is that their heroines are too passive, too easily accepting of what happened to them. Yet how strange it would be to make every detail accurately reflect historical times but give the female characters unlikely modern attitudes. The hard truth is that a woman who had sex without marriage during the patriarchal period was “damaged goods,” a female fallen from grace regardless of the circumstances. She often had no choice except to accept her situation.

In my first historical romance, Love’s Wild Desire, the heroine Catherine, a strong woman, is convinced by her mother and the censure of society that her only option is to accept the marriage offer of the man who took her innocence.

Melanie in Tender Betrayal also accepts an honorable proposal, but her motive is private and personal revenge for both the hero’s act toward and his part in the death of her grandfather.

In Royal Seduction, book 1 of the “Royal Princes of Ruthenia” duo, Angeline’s family abandons her to the tender mercies of Prince Rolfe who holds her captive.

Eleanora, heroine of Notorious Angel, is stranded in war-torn Central America, and remains the mistress of Colonel Grant Farrell because the alternative is to become a camp follower left prey to all.

Julia from The Storm and the Splendor accepts her position because it’s the only way she can achieve her dream and return home again.

In these Bodice Ripper stories, for the heroine to make the best of what was happening to her, at least on the surface, is the intelligent course; to fight it tooth and nail would be exhausting and even dangerous. The heroine who can enjoy sex while keeping her deeper responses and emotions hidden actually has the upper hand: beyond maintaining her pride, she becomes that ultimate fantasy figure, a woman able to arouse a desire so powerful the hero will go to any lengths to have her. Meanwhile, her grace under fire, new-found internal strength and inviolate personal honor changes him. At the point where she began to feel she cares too much, she usually escapes from the relationship, even at grave risk.

Cases in point are Embrace and Conquer, in which Félicité runs away from Morgan only to wind up in a pirate stronghold, and Golden Fancy where Serena is left vulnerable to a madman who kills women.

The popularity of this type of fiction waned in time, done in by those who were so uncomfortable with the idea of feminine pleasure they labeled it “soft porn for women,” as well as those who considered any sexual event that occurred without the women’s enthusiastic shouts of “Yes, yes, yes!” as a heinous crime. Then, too, the interest of its authors declined as the plot device became clichéd through overuse. Still, like a secret love child that spawns a new family dynasty, this much-reviled offshoot of the romance genre lives on in the bloodlines of today’s romance novels with their exploration of the sensual lives of women.

What happened to those classic “Bodice Rippers” from the Seventies and Eighties? They are still out there, still being reprinted for a new audience, still being downloaded and read by hundreds of thousands. There’s even a special group called “Bodice Rippers Anonymous” on Goodreads.com that’s dedicated to them. They seem to have eternal life, proof that however much we may deplore it in the 21st Century, sex and violence do still sell -- at least when combined with a worthy heroine and a hero’s desperate desire.

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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Monday, March 11, 2013

The Power of the Penny

Flowers are blooming, birds are singing and spring is on its way. This is the time of year where we come out of winter hibernation and get active, travel and go out more. So, today I decided to start collecting change in my "Fun Fund" jar for the upcoming season.

Well, to be quite honest, I really just wanted to lighten my purse. I'd noticed how heavy my bag was for the past few weeks and wondered if I simply just carried too much "stuff" with me or if something else might be causing me to feel as if I were carrying barbells on a daily basis. After further inspection of its contents, I came to the conclusion that it was weighed down with way too many loose coins. Funny how they seem to go straight to the bottom of your purse never to be seen again unless you send out a search party. It was time to make a change and lighten the load.

 I decided to take out my large decorated plastic jar we had used last year to countdown our days to Disneyworld and recycle it into something useful. I carefully took all of my loose coins from my purse and placed them in the jar. Then I did the same thing with my console in my car. Next, was the scavenger hunt through my house to find other areas where pennies, nickels, dimes and quarters might be hiding.  By the time I finished my jar was  a quarter way full and a little heavy.  Really, how does one who seems to stay broke have so much loose change? 


Of course, after seeing how many coins were already in the jar, I couldn't resist counting some of it. Wow! I probably have close to forty dollars (if not  a little more) just in change. That's a dinner and movie night for my son and I or it could be an outing to the zoo and a pizza. Amazing how something so little can add up so quickly.  By this point the wheels in my mind were working over time. We could continue to save coins until summer vacation for extra spending money or we could use it every few weeks for a short outing. Then again, we could also save it for small emergencies. The possibilities are endless.  It's a win-win situation. My purse is lighter, coins are not usually something you will miss from your monthly budget and you'll have a little extra dough on hand for a nice treat once in a while.  Sounds like a good plan to me!  Bring on the change. I might even throw in a few loose ones here and there to help my "Fun Fund" add up more quickly.