Sunday, August 4, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – Brainstorming

So far I’ve talked about where story ideas come from, naming characters, story situations, title choices and creating characters. Scroll down for more of this blog series on how I put a book together, using my next italian Billionaires book as an example.



Every fiction story, whether commercial or literary, is made up of a series of crises. These crises, sometimes referred to as dramatic events or plot points, engage readers from page one and draw them ever deeper into the narrative until they reach the climax. Careful construction and placement of the crises is what creates a “page turner” book.

Brainstorming is the practice of establishing possible crises for a book in advance. Some writers prefer to avoid this step in favor of flying by the seat of their pants so are known as “pantsers.” They claim advance plotting inhibits their creative muse. No problem; there’s definitely more than one way to write a book. However, most best-selling authors who work on strict deadlines eventually become “plotters.” Planning the dramatic events of a work in progress prevents hours of staring into space trying to decide what should happen next. It also helps avoid repetitive scenes and false trails that lead to time-consuming revision.

Established wisdom says most books of 100,000 words require a minimum of five crises to keep a story moving, plus a grand climax to bring events to a satisfactory conclusion. Books of 50,000 words, such as my Italian Billionaire stories, seem to work best with a minimum of three crises plus the climax.

Plot points in a novel, particularly in romance, need not be hugely dramatic or physical in nature. They can, instead, be emotional crises or decisions made by the characters which change the direction of the story. My own books often combine these quieter crises along with noisier ones.

With these criteria in mind, I usually sit down at my computer, open a new MS Word page, and start typing with the first brainstorming idea that springs to mind. I’ve also used pen and paper, typewriter, Dictaphone and the notes app on my tablet. The method of capturing ideas doesn’t matter as long as you make them concrete in some manner.

If nothing comes when I first sit down, I concentrate on the inciting incident for my story, that essential first meeting of hero and heroine that will set events in motion. Once that’s out of the way, I’m usually well started on the rest.

I cull nothing during this exercise. Any idea will do, no matter how trite or clichéd. The object is simply to put the brain in gear and keep it there. Setting down common occurrences gets them out of the way, clearing the subconscious mind for more creative possibilities.

Each idea gets a separate paragraph, but I impose no other order. I simply type as fast as my brain produces new material, non-stop if possible. At this point, the less left brain logic you put in the way of your creative right brain, the better.

My goal with this exercise is to produce 25 or more possible ideas, and I try not to stop until I have at least that number. More is better; there’s no such thing as too many. I go for broke, typing until my mind is blank.

Once my list is done, I choose the most exciting or original plot points and place them in approximate order of occurrence in the story. But I don’t discard the rest; no, indeed! Some may become useful secondary events, particularly if my concept of the story changes in any way. The finished list is saved in a file labeled “Story Notes” that’s included in the main story folder.

With my list of crises in hand, I have the bones of my book. Like a sculptor using an armature as the basis for a work, however, it’s merely a guide. There’s still room for infinite creativity with different ideas or in designing the setting and its atmosphere, developing the characters and their backstories, and injecting emotion into the events that will take place. For me, that’s where the fun begins.
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Wednesday, July 31, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – Creating Characters

So far I’ve talked about where story ideas come from, naming characters, story situations, and title choices. Scroll down for more of this blog series on how I put a book together.


Photographs can be inspirational.
Characters are actually created on the page as you write; there’s just no way to get around it. How you describe them; the clothes they wear; the way they speak, think, act and react; the decisions they make, integrity they show and a thousand other things, all add to the impression. It’s an ongoing process that doesn’t stop until the story ends.
You can get a head start, however, with the use of a character chart. The more details you fill in for your people, the easier it will be to get inside their heads as you put them on the manuscript page. Of particular importance are the goals and yearnings of your main characters as these often drive a story forward.

More inspiration...
Having an easily accessible chart in a computer file, or printed out and posted above your desk, can save time and trouble when you need to remember a character’s hair and eye color or pertinent features. It will also make it easier to keep their actions and emotions consistent throughout the book.
I normally fill out complete details for my heroine and hero; the better I can see them in my mind’s eye, the better they seem to translate to the page.  I also do at least partial charts for the villain (if any) and secondary characters who may have important roles.
Take a look at this example for the heroine of my next Italian Billionaire book, "The Amalfitano's Bold Abduction":
Name: Dana Marsden
Hair: auburn, long, wavy
Eyes: brown with a dark gray outer ring
Description: tall, graceful, strong
Features and Marks: Has a tattoo of a boy on a dolphin
 
Attitude: Take charge, almost overconfident. She gets along well with men, though she considers most of those she works with Neanderthals. Swims for exercise, could have been a champion.
 
Occupation:Policewoman/traffic cop, though she’d like to make detective.
 
Personality:Out-going. She was brought up with three brothers, feels she knows too much about men to ever fall in love with one, refuses to become dependent upon or subservient to a man the way her mother was with her father.

Flaws:Too self-sufficient, too independent, declines to acknowledge her softer side.

Cares about: Her family, her job, animals, children, and the right of people, particularly children, to live without fear.

Goal, External: To escape from the situation she’s in, to best the man who holds her, to be free of his control and her unwanted reaction to him.

Goal, Internal To relax, take it easy, accept and enjoy life. She’s been sent on vacation because she’s too in-your-face, too intense about her job. She is too hard on drivers who might be a danger to children, actually broke the arm of a man who was driving drunk with his preschool son in the backseat.

Yearns for: Acceptance as she is by a man she can respect.

Here is an blank character chart to be copied for use:
Character Chart
Name:
Hair:
Eyes:
Description:
Inspiration of a different kind.
Features and Marks:
Attitude:
Background:
Cares about:
Goal, External:
Goal, Internal:
Occupation:
Personality:
Personality Flaw(s):
Regrets:
Weakness:
Yearns for:
 
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Saturday, July 27, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – The Title Task

So far I’ve talked about where story ideas come from, naming characters and dramatic story situations. Scroll down for more of this blog series on how I put a book together.
The right title can make a book, while the wrong one can sink it. Finding something worthwhile is a guessing game, but there are a few things to keep in mind.
To begin with, you can’t claim exclusive ownership of a title under the copyright laws of the United States.
Case in point: Back in 1978, I wrote a historical romance with a working title of "Tender Betrayal." My editor liked it and let it stand for the published book. Several other authors have liked it over the years, too, as there have been at least four other romance novels with that title!


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So let’s break it down to see why it clicks:
  •  The word “Tender” has a soft sound appropriate for the romance genre. It’s also a word with built-in appeal for most people.
  • Pairing it with a contrasting word like “Betrayal” sets up immediate tension.
  • The two words together imply a story with strong conflict between the main characters.
  • They hint at a moral dilemma, which is always a plus.
  • One-word and two-word titles are favored in traditional publishing because they show up from a distance when physical books are on display.
So how did I arrive at this title? Using the story I had in mind, I made two lists. One included words that sounded romantic and beguiling. The other used words that were appropriate for the dramatic events in the story. When the two lists were done, I make a third that randomly combined words from the first two. “Tender Betrayal” was the combo that worked best.
A side note here: Titles are included in the copyright protection for most books published outside the U.S. That’s one reason books from the U.S. that are sold in foreign markets are given new titles – they can’t legally have the same title as a previously published work.
Being a fairly organized writer, I still like the “two lists” system of title selection, but there are other methods. Biblical, literary and poetical references have always been popular. Themes work, as do sudden inspirations. Some writers go with whatever is popular at the given moment; as an example, title variations on the words "Shades" and "Gray” have been sadly overused lately. Other words that romance readers seem to like are Bride, Cowboy, Duke, Fiancé, Fiancée, Groom, Highlander, Highlands, Kilt, Mistress, Pirate, Prince, Seduction, Sheikh, Stolen, Taken, Wedding, and so on. Infinite variations on these can be found in romance titles on Amazon.
As e-books have gained in popularity, a different title trend has surfaced. Since these covers are viewed up-close-and-personal on computer, tablet or reader, they are no longer limited to one or two words. It’s still a good idea to make the title easily readable in thumbnail size, but that criteria can be trumped by a longer title with a better sense of story.
Harlequin has been experimenting with longer titles for some of its category lines for a couple of years. The result is books called “The Cost of her Innocence,” “One Night with the Sheikh,” “The Return of Her Past,” etc. As this romance publishing behemoth does nothing without copious and expensive research, these longer titles appear to have proven their worth.
When I set out to write a series of shorter romances as an experiment in independent publishing, I saw no reason not to benefit from Harlequin’s research dime. The titles for the first two books in my Italian Billionaire’s series, then, are “The Tuscan’s Revenge Wedding” and “The Venetian’s Daring Seduction.”
So what’s the title choice for my WIP? Good question!
I’ve been going back and forth on the best way to indicate that the hero is from the Amalfi Coast of Italy. I mean the Italian for that is Amalfitano, and I like it, but will an American audience recognize it? On the other hand, is the Americanized version, Amalfian, any better? Doesn’t Amafitano just sound more Italian, not to mention more heroic? Or will readers recognize the word either way?
Ah, well, I’m seldom sure of a title until I put “The End” on the final page of the manuscript, so I have time to decide. For now, the working title is (Drumroll please!): "The Amalfitano’s Bold Abduction."
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Thursday, July 25, 2013

A Prince of a Hero


There they are, the most beattiful of the "Beautiful People" these days in one of the happiest moments of their lives, the prince, Kate and little George. And they're color matched in baby-boy-blue, for the perfect photo-op. You have to smile for the fact that everything turned out so well in their world. Yes, and hope they will always be so blessed.

But the thing that struck me during this presentation of the royal baby, fourth in line to the throne, was this: "He's got her looks, thankfully," Will joked, winking and tipping his head towards his wife.

Now that, guys, is how it's done. That's handsome manners and affection and romance all rolled into one. That just made William a prince of a hero in my book.
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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Wednesday, July 24, 2013

The Anatomy of a Book – The Story Situation


So far I’ve talked about where story ideas come from and naming characters. Scroll down for more of this blog series on how I put a book together.

People tend to think of plotting as a murky business with endless possibilities. While it’s true there are infinite ways for story ideas to play out, most begin with one of only 36 dramatic situations. See here for the complete list of these along with explanations and examples: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Thirty-Six_Dramatic_Situations

This list by Georges Polti dates from the late 19th century and applies mainly to literary fiction. Other writers have simplified it for more commercial work; a quick Internet search will bring up several variations. I’ve actually adapted it for use by romance novelists, which was a fun exercise. But no matter how you look at it, the end result is the same: we have only a limited number of basic situations from which to craft a book.

Examples of romance situations include Star-Crossed Lovers, Love at First Sight, Opposites Attract, Marriage of Convenience, Secret Lover, Boy/Girl Next Door and of course the eternally popular, Secret Baby. These are mere starting points for the creation of stories, however; it’s how you flesh them out and bring your characters into the action that counts.

For my current WIP, the situation choice was practically made for me once I decided to use the Amalfi Coast and a private Mediterranean island as settings. What could be better than an Abducted Heroine scenario? Just think, isolation on that island, no way to escape, no one to interact with other than the self-made billionaire hero. Well, except for the cat named Trouble, of course. The idea has elements of a Stranded on a Desert Isle situation, too, doesn’t it? And that’s not a bad thing, the combining of two types.

Now all I have to do is (1) make this story believable in a contemporary novel, (2) give the hero good and sufficient reason for his action and (3) come up with something for this couple to talk about and do (Well, other than the obvious.) while thrown together for several days. Of the three, the last will probably be the hardest!
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Since publishing her first book at age 27, New York Times bestselling and award-winning author Jennifer Blake has gone on to write over 65 historical and contemporary novels in multiple genres. She brings the story-telling power and seductive passion of the South to her stories, reflecting her 8th-generation Louisiana heritage. Jennifer lives with her husband in northern Louisiana.
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